Another rejection, this time from Harlequin Mills & Boon Romance.
This was for Her Cinderella Secret, which placed third in the Toronto Romance Writers' Golden Opportunity contest in the contemporary romance category. I find it interesting how different people like and dislike different things about the manuscript. I don't think any one opinion is wrong, but it hammers home the adage: You can't please everyone.
So, back to the old drawing board....
My next step will be to have another looksee, work out some kinks and submit to Carina Press.
In case you're interested, here are the first rejections for the first drafts of this MS. It was significantly revised for the Golden Opp contest.